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ghostintheclosetAuthor: SL Armstrong & K Piet
Publisher: Storm Moon Press
Length: 15,100 words
Genre: m/m Contemporary Fantasy/Paranormal Erotica/Romance
Heat: 3 – Sexy & Mild
Sex Frequency: 2 – Few and Far Between
Keywords/Tags: Serial, Short Story, Magic, Ghosts/Spirits, Flashbacks, Secrets & Lies
Rating: Pretty Good

**This review contains spoilers for those who haven’t read the first two stories in the serial, “A Meeting of Fate” and “Life of the Party”.**

BLURB

You think you know the story of Dorian Gray, but you’re wrong. The real story didn’t end the way Oscar Wilde penned; in fact, it hasn’t ended at all. The ageless beauty of Dorian Gray walks now in our world of cellphones and lattes and internet porn. His latest conquest is Gabriel Lawrence, a paranormal investigator with a secret or two of his own. But the trouble with a life as long as Dorian’s is that the skeletons are threatening to overrun the closet… and not all of them want to stay dead.

Season 1: Overture introduces Gabriel to the truth of a world he had only suspected, where ghost hunting is the least of his worries. And at the heart of it all is the mysterious and fascinating Dorian Gray, as though he’d stepped out of the pages of the book bearing his name. But if he has, he hasn’t come through alone. And this figure from a past Dorian had though long behind him bears a grudge nurtured for a hundred years and intends to tear down everything Dorian has built, a piece at a time.

Episode 3: Ghost in the Closet
The aftermath of Dorian’s party leaves Gabriel and Michael reeling, and both become more determined than ever to wring some answers from this so-called ‘Dorian Gray’. Dorian’s continued hedging, though, pushes Michael beyond his limits, forcing him to reveal his presence. But what he could never have predicted is that Dorian isn’t at all surprised…

REVIEW

This third part of the Immortal Symphony serial is definitely the part of the story that I was waiting for. The dynamic between Gabriel, Michael and Dorian changes quite drastically after the second story, where Gabriel partook in the casual drug use and orgiastic (very public) pleasures in celebration of Dorian’s birthday. But what is a common evening of debauchery for Dorian is quite honestly uncomfortably hedonistic to Gabriel. Always the good boy in comparison to his twin brother Michael’s more outlandish actions, this story shows more than ever before how the addition of Dorian to the brothers’ lives has had an affect on them. Gabriel, who has always had trouble letting loose and giving up control to participate in the kinds of things like Dorian’s sex party, finds that he quite likes forcing himself to explore new opportunities and experience life in a more hedonistic way. Michael’s whole existence, however, is a testament to the partying lifestyle of excess drugs and sex, one which ultimately cost him his life. Seeing his brothers actions hits Michael the hardest. This drives a firm wedge between Michael and Dorian, and when Gabriel doesn’t seem as upset at Dorian and Michael feels he should, Michael decides to take over his brothers body and show Dorian his displeasure. The resulting confrontation between the two pushes open the door to Dorian’s secrets, until they start spilling out into the light.

While I liked this story even more than the first two — specifically because we’re starting to get some real answers — I’m still very of two minds about this series and the characters. First, I really adore the writing of Dorian’s character, but I don’t actually like Dorian at all. I say that I really adore the writing of him because I’ve suspected all along that my emotions are purposefully being manipulated as far as how I feel about him. He’s really not likable at all except in that pre-karma way, the “he’s going to get what’s coming to him” way, whether that be literal or the satisfaction of watching him start to have real feelings for someone. That’s why I can’t say I categorically hate Dorian, though he does make me uncomfortable. He’s a much more complicated character than that. In fact, he’s the character that really parallels the overall unfolding plot, because the reveal of his secrets drives the plot forward (which we see in this story as flashbacks). These two authors are really using this unusual medium to explore non-traditional romance characters. Dorian is such a big character that his presence often takes over parts of the story, and ultimately, I feel like he’ll be the deciding factor as to where the story will go as it navigates the boundary between erotica and romance.

The second part of how I feel about this serial is that as far as the overall plot and the emotional growth of the characters, this serial is still in it’s infancy, so those things like how I don’t’ like Dorian very much have very little impact about how I feel about the story overall. I suppose, I should just say that while I’m reviewing and having to give each little story in this serial a rating, I’m really reserving judgement for myself.

Readers who buy the Season Pass (all six Overture season episodes in one) will get an overall discount but also some freebies. The first of those freebies came out with this story in the form of a short story. “The Melody” goes far back in time to an innocent and young Dorian. We get to meet Basil, an artist that young Dorian loves with all the infatuation of a boy and who is also a character importantly referenced to in the first story. While the scene between the two isn’t completely instrumental to the main story (you don’t have to read it), I did really enjoy being able to get to see him and see who he really was to Dorian at that age. Plus, seeing Dorian as positive, hopeful and undamaged gives me a lot of hope that we’ll soon get to see a real change in Dorian in the main story as well.

The fourth story in the Immortal Symphony serial is out now!


lifeoftheparty immortalsymphonyovertureTitle: Life of the Party (Immortal Symphony: Overture #2)
Author: SL Armstrong & K Piet
Publisher: Storm Moon Press
Length: 15,300 words
Genre: m/m Contemporary Paranormal Erotica
Heat: 5 – Off the Charts!
Sex Frequency: 4 – Very Often
Keywords/Tags: Serial, Short Story, Ghosts/Spirits, Public Sex, Drug Use, Multiple Partners, m/m/f scenes, girly parts!
Rating: Pretty Good

BLURB

You think you know the story of Dorian Gray, but you’re wrong. The real story didn’t end the way Oscar Wilde penned; in fact, it hasn’t ended at all. The ageless beauty of Dorian Gray walks now in our world of cellphones and lattes and internet porn. His latest conquest is Gabriel Lawrence, a paranormal investigator with a secret or two of his own. But the trouble with a life as long as Dorian’s is that the skeletons are threatening to overrun the closet… and not all of them want to stay dead.

Season 1: Overture introduces Gabriel to the truth of a world he had only suspected, where ghost hunting is the least of his worries. And at the heart of it all is the mysterious and fascinating Dorian Gray, as though he’d stepped out of the pages of the book bearing his name. But if he has, he hasn’t come through alone. And this figure from a past Dorian had though long behind him bears a grudge nurtured for a hundred years and intends to tear down everything Dorian has built, a piece at a time.

Episode 2: Life of the Party
Gabriel’s first glimpse into Dorian’s lifestyle was only the beginning, and now he finds himself tumbling further down the rabbit hole. Dorian’s birthday party introduces Gabriel to some of Dorian’s friends, all as free-spirited and debauched as Dorian himself. Through them, he learns that he isn’t the first that Dorian has drawn into his web this way, not even the hundred-and-first. And yet somehow, all of Gabriel’s concerns instantly seem strangely inconsequential at Dorian’s slightest touch, fueling Michael’s fears that there is so much more to Dorian than they could guess.

REVIEW

I was both excited and a little wary of reading “Life of the Party.” This is the second “episode” in the serialized story — about a modern day Dorian Gray. He’s a man whose mysterious powers and long life have given him an extreme confidence and at this point in the story, I might say arrogance. He’s a sexual creature to the point of extreme debauchery, which Gabriel soon finds out when he attends Dorian’s birthday party, which is pretty much a thinly veiled excuse for an orgy. Every gathering is an excuse for an orgy when Dorian is around! 🙂

This second story does a pretty good job of extending and strengthening those things which stood out in the first story. Gabriel is suspicious of Dorian and who he really is, but as his proximity to Dorian fluctuations so does his reaction to him, like a drug. When Dorian is near Gabriel forgets himself and is overcome with lust enough to distract from his conscience, or better named, his brother and ghost Michael. The two brothers have an interesting dynamic when we first meet them in the first story. Michael does indeed act as Gabriel’s conscience for the most part, but with his own personality and also wary attentiveness that Gabriel not succumb to the same pitfalls in life that he did before his untimely death. While Gabriel loves his brother, you can see that he often resents him as well. Or, he is at least uncomfortable with his presence. This complicated dynamic becomes even further strained in this story. Michael is already naturally suspicious of Dorian, who he can’t figure out on a spiritual level. But seeing Dorian’s effect on Gabriel alarms Michael further in Life of the Party. Dorian’s gift of spreading lust affects Gabriel so strongly in this story that he becomes a libidinous creature that shocks him afterward. It’s a kind of dubious violation that worries Gabriel.

That realization and ultimate agreement with his brother about his suspicions causes a bit of a change in Gabriel that sets a new tone and a new direction going into the third story. I have a feeling that in the next story Gabriel is going to be a bit more cautious and a bit more insistent that he find out Dorian’s secrets.

For the most part this story carried on the same as the story before it. Though we get to see a bit of a different setting and the characters are fleshed out a bit more, there’s not a huge change yet in the character dynamics, though as I said, this story seems to be setting the stage for some kind of upcoming change. Of course, there are still orgies aplenty 🙂

I’m still really enjoying this serial and looking forward to the coming stories. I have to admit that this story started to edge closer to the line in my comfort zone, but that made this story all the more exciting for me. I never quite felt that it was in danger of going too far for me (it would have to be very, very far!), but there was a bit of a discordant mood in this story that felt as if it was perfectly set to make the reader feel Gabriel’s warring excitement and unease with the sex party and his part in it.

Part 3 of Immortal Symphony: Overture, “Ghost in the Closet”, is out now. Part 4, “Shadow from the Past”, is to be released on May 10.


ameetingoffateovertureTitle: A Meeting of Fate (Immortal Symphony: Overture #1)
Author: SL Armstrong & K Piet
Publisher: Storm Moon Press
Length: 16,660 words
Genre: m/m Paranormal Erotica
Heat: 5 – Off the Charts!
Sex Frequency: 5 – Over and Over
Keywords/Tags: Serial, m/m/f scenes, England, Scotland, Drug Use, Sexy to the 999s, Ghosts/Spirits, Rich/Poor, Secrets & Lies
Rating: Pretty Good

BLURB

You think you know the story of Dorian Gray, but you’re wrong. The real story didn’t end the way Oscar Wilde penned; in fact, it hasn’t ended at all. The ageless beauty of Dorian Gray walks now in our world of cellphones and lattes and internet porn. His latest conquest is Gabriel Lawrence, a paranormal investigator with a secret or two of his own. But the trouble with a life as long as Dorian’s is that the skeletons are threatening to overrun the closet… and not all of them want to stay dead.



Season 1: Overture introduces Gabriel to the truth of a world he had only suspected, where ghost hunting is the least of his worries. And at the heart of it all is the mysterious and fascinating Dorian Gray, as though he’d stepped out of the pages of the book bearing his name. But if he has, he hasn’t come through alone. And this figure from a past Dorian had though long behind him bears a grudge nurtured for a hundred years and intends to tear down everything Dorian has built, a piece at a time.

REVIEW

I’ve been eagerly awaiting this first “episode” in the Dorian Gray serial K Piet and SL Armstrong have written. I’m iffy about serials — sometimes they work for me and sometimes not so much (I’d rather wait and read them all at once — but episodic releases are different than a pure serial in the way that they’re released. They’re less of a chapter release and each one tends to be a little more self-contained. That’s how I felt with this first episode. I’m even more excited to read the second episode, not only because I liked this one a lot and look forward to what happens next, but because the first release of a longer work like this will undoubtedly be a setup to the main story, which is this:

We meet many characters here and I’m not quite sure which ones will be important later, with the exception of three: Dorian, Gabriel and Michael. Dorian is now over two hundred years old and firmly ensconced in the modern age, yet still holding an old-world flair. He’s a captivating sex god, firmly holding the strings of the puppets around him in an elaborate, hedonistic dance. He meets Gabriel when the man walks in front of his limo and interrupts his blow job. Gabriel is an American, new to the UK and on his way to a new job in his paranormal investigation business. And Michael… Michael is Gabriel’s twin, dead and reappeared as a ghost in Gabriel’s mind. They share one body and work together in their paranormal job. Dorian and Gabriel meet once again and share an afternoon of sex that goes beyond what both are accustomed to. Surprising Dorian is almost impossible, but Dorian can’t seem to forget Gabriel, and his insistence that Gabriel come with him to his home in Scotland is an opportunity that will set the stage for a relationship over the series of episodes.

The first scene of this whole serial really sets the stage for is to come and especially this modern Dorian. The first scene is from the POV of a young college woman who is having sex with two men she just met, a man named Oliver and Dorian. The scene shows the level of sex and debauchery that surrounds Dorian, as well as his lack of discrimination in the gender of his partners. While I don’t usually read anything with girly parts, this didn’t bother me so much (even when there’s another scene later in the story with a different woman), because I know that it’s a small part of the real story. Nevertheless, the sex in this story pretty much blew me away. Even with that first scene I wasn’t expecting quite the level of sex in this story, but I was happy with it anyway. I’ll be interested to see in the future stories, once Gabriel and Dorian become more important to one another, how Dorian’s sexual appetites with multiple partners will affect Gabriel. I can honestly say that I have no idea what to expect of the coming stories, and that is exciting.

So, getting in on reading this new serial at this point is all up to how you feel about serials or episodic releases. If they’re not for you, then by all means wait a while and I’ll be sure to update you every month how they’re progressing. Otherwise, jump in and join me 🙂

Also, just a note about how I classified the genre in this review. Since the romance hasn’t really started yet, I’m marking this first story as erotica. It sure has enough sex for it! 😉